Six Sentence Sunday 55

This week I’ve got a taste of Bad Choices for you. This is a story I entered in a cold read session by Angela James of Carina Press at the OCC RWA meeting yesterday. Sadly, I didn’t catch that I’d used some descriptive phases more than once. Otherwise, it didn’t go too badly for me. LOL In this scene, Peyton tells Cooper of the secret life her fiance lived.

“He liked to be dominated by men physically, sexually, in every way.”

“He never loved me.” Her raw whisper held years worth of pain and frustration.

One large hand tugged the photo frame from her, turning it face down on her desk. “He loved you more than you could ever imagine, but no matter how much he fought it, he just couldn’t shake his kink. He lived for pain,” Peyton said softly.

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15 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday 55

  1. Now this is very intriguing. I was very caught up in this emotion.

  2. Dee Carney says:

    That’s definitely a very intriguing six. And you have to tell me more about the cold read!

  3. Very intriguing and revealing at the same time. Can’t wait to read more about Peyton. 🙂

  4. Alix says:

    I'[m so involved now, I want to know more. Great six!

  5. I like it! Definitely want to know more about these characters and their pasts.

  6. Karla Doyle says:

    I’m with everybody else…very intriguing excerpt. Six sentences are nice, but maybe we need a ten sentence Tuesday or something, so we can get a bit more! 😉

  7. Gem Sivad says:

    Oh Lex, this is so real. The dialogue, description, her pain and his explanation all ring so true. Fantastic writing.

  8. Laura Kaye says:

    Lot of emotion there! Love it!

  9. Lots of emotion in those few sentences. Makes me want to know more. Great 6!

  10. Dakota Trace says:

    Ooooo, I like the sound of this book. Is it going to be published?

  11. Lisa Fox says:

    Wow, this sounds like quite a history.

  12. Definitely intriguing! I want to know more to their story.

  13. Jasmine says:

    oh, intriguing six!!